When
it comes to writing a successful matrimony profile, a quality introduction is
equally as important as a clear photo. In fact, an introduction is such an
integral part of your profile that Internationalpatidarmarriage.com will not
accept any members without one.
The
truth of the matter is, Internationalpatidarmarriage.com is a matrimony site
and marriage is for life. If you are serious about finding a suitable life
partner, you will make the effort to introduce yourself properly.
Writing
an introduction is not as daunting as it sounds and once you get the first few
words down, the rest will flow easy. In this guide I will write an introduction
for myself and break the process down, step by step. Please use the
introduction we create as a guide for writing your own. Do not copy the
introduction as your own as that would make your profile fake.
Step
One: Say Hello
When
meeting someone for the first time in real life, whether it be in a work
environment or social, you typically will shake hands and introduce yourself
using your name. On the Internet however, including your name in your
introduction is optional. We took a sample out of the thousands of profiles on Internationalpatidarmarriage.com
and found that those who include their first name in their introduction receive
more interest than those that do not. We believe this is because introducing
yourself with your first name creates a connection with the reader straight
away. As I am going to write the most effective introduction possible, I will
start by providing my name and where I am from.
" Hello,
my name is Heli and I was born and raised in Ahmedabad however I recently
shifted to Bangalore for work. "
Step
Two: Your Beliefs
Next,
we discuss our beliefs and outlook on life. It is important to be honest about
your beliefs even if it is not in line with mainstream society. For example,
you should not state that you are religious or wish to live a traditional life
if this is not a true reflection of yourself. Failing to accurately describe
yourself will dissuade those that are a good match from contacting you whilst
attracting those that are not.
" I
am a simple and practical person with a positive attitude. My beliefs are both
modern and traditional. I believe we need to progress and evolve as a society
but not lose our traditional moral values. "
Step
Three: Career And Education
Now I
am going to share the details of my career and education. The primary goal in
this section is to demonstrate (especially to parents of potential partners)
that you are educated and successful in life. Parents are not interested in how
funny your jokes are or how much time you spend working on your body in the
gym. They want to know that you can support yourself financially and will not
become a burden. As a female, it is very important for me to state if I intend
to continue working after marriage. This is critical and should be disclosed as
early as possible during any marriage discussions.
" I
am currently working for Internationalpatidarmarriage.com in Bangalore as both
a web developer and relationship counselor. I have completed a Bachelor of
Psychology at Southern Cross University in Australia. Designing websites allows
me to explore my creative side whilst my knowledge of psychology enables me to
assist those in need of advice. I love my job and intend to continue working
after marriage. "
Step
Four: Family Details
One
of the most important details that is commonly missing from introductions is
that concerning family. Parents and brides particularly, will be expecting you
to provide some basic information about your family, such as their beliefs, how
many siblings there are and if it is middle or upper class. If the bride is to
live with the groom and his parents after marriage, this information will be
crucial to her.
" In
my family there is my father, my mother and myself. Father is a businessman who
works in the textile industry while mother is a home maker. My family is a mix
of modern and tradition beliefs. My parents are still based in Delhi but they
are very important to me so I visit them as often as possible. Father travels a
lot in his business so occasionally he is able to see me in Bangalore. "
Step
Five: Your Ideal Partner
Finally,
you should state briefly the type of person you believe will be a good match
for you. This will say as much about you as it will of the type partner you are
looking for. It is perfectly fine to be blunt and honest here.
" I
am looking for somebody who is modern but still believes that marriage is
sacred. He should be my best friend as well as husband. He must be educated and
with goals in life. Caste is no bar but he should not smoke. A love of dogs is
also important. "
That
concludes my introduction which is 279 words long and covers the basics. Our
research has revealed that the most effective introductions are between 250 -
350 words long. You may decide to share your hobbies or provide more detail on
the main topics but I recommend you do not write more than 400 words.